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My name is Ariadne and I'm new here. I thought I might share with you this poem I wrote. It isn't much, but it will have to do.
What am I to you,
Another cheap lay?
'Cause I'd hate to break it to you,
But you're not all that good.
In fact, I'm glad when you finish early.
Heavens knows I've tried to teach you what pleases me,
But it never works.
So Bear, I ask of you,
Why do I put up with this?
-Ariadne
What am I to you,
Another cheap lay?
'Cause I'd hate to break it to you,
But you're not all that good.
In fact, I'm glad when you finish early.
Heavens knows I've tried to teach you what pleases me,
But it never works.
So Bear, I ask of you,
Why do I put up with this?
-Ariadne
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Re: Hi.
Sun, May 21, 2006 - 5:38 PMI think I got the point:-) I'd love to hear you read this at an open mic:-) I wonder how many people would relate to it:)
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Re: Hi.
Tue, May 23, 2006 - 12:36 PMyou have a strong voice as a poet, I hope that expressing your pain will allow a more positive direction to enter both your life and your art
