new song

topic posted Fri, June 2, 2006 - 11:29 AM by  Kristi

hey everyone... im new on here and looking for some feedback.... check it out and let me know what you think




On a flight of fancy
I travelled through time
Back to a place
Where you were mine
Where your lovin arms
Once held me close
And your hazel eyes once danced with mine

So this is my last goodbye
The last tear I'll ever cry
I'll never see your face again
Or hear your whisper in the wind
So I'm gonna let you go
With this last goodbye
Yea this is my last goodbye

When we met on that fateful night
Everything felt so right
But the past is gone
And so are you
Now all I've left
Are these words to you

There was a time a thought
The pain would never end
And your memory'd always haunt me
Right to the bitter end
But as I've struggled
I felt the pain disappear
So I'm leaving you with these final words
And I hope they're loud and clear
posted by:
Kristi
Dallas
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    Re: new song

    Fri, June 2, 2006 - 1:57 PM
    Great song, how I can relate. WHoever you wrote this for should be happy to have someone who would take the time to write so prolifically a song with such feelings of unrequited love..... I reflect back. Katherine
    • Re: new song

      Fri, June 2, 2006 - 2:13 PM
      thanks a bunch.. i am sorry to say however that the person this song was written about will probably never know about it seeing how we havnt spoken in about a year.... but i do appreciate the feedback and would love to hear from everyone else

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