hey everyone... im new on here and looking for some feedback.... check it out and let me know what you think
On a flight of fancy
I travelled through time
Back to a place
Where you were mine
Where your lovin arms
Once held me close
And your hazel eyes once danced with mine
So this is my last goodbye
The last tear I'll ever cry
I'll never see your face again
Or hear your whisper in the wind
So I'm gonna let you go
With this last goodbye
Yea this is my last goodbye
When we met on that fateful night
Everything felt so right
But the past is gone
And so are you
Now all I've left
Are these words to you
There was a time a thought
The pain would never end
And your memory'd always haunt me
Right to the bitter end
But as I've struggled
I felt the pain disappear
So I'm leaving you with these final words
And I hope they're loud and clear
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Unsu...
Re: new song
Fri, June 2, 2006 - 1:57 PMGreat song, how I can relate. WHoever you wrote this for should be happy to have someone who would take the time to write so prolifically a song with such feelings of unrequited love..... I reflect back. Katherine -
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Re: new song
Fri, June 2, 2006 - 2:13 PMthanks a bunch.. i am sorry to say however that the person this song was written about will probably never know about it seeing how we havnt spoken in about a year.... but i do appreciate the feedback and would love to hear from everyone else
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